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[์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ] ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ์—„๊ธ‰ ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ 5ํŽธ ๋ชจ์Œ (์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ, ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ, cover letter,์˜์–ด์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ, ์˜์–ด์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ)

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8P ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ
[์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ] ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ์—„๊ธ‰ ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ 5ํŽธ ๋ชจ์Œ (์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ, ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ, cover letter,์˜์–ด์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ, ์˜์–ด์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ)
  • ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ

    ์†Œ๊ฐœ

    ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ์„ธ๋ จ๋œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์—„์„ ๋œ ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž ๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ(์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ) 5ํŽธ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•, ์š”๋ น๋“ฑ์€ ์ƒ๋žตํ•˜์˜€๊ณ ,
    ํ—ค๋“œํ—Œํ„ฐ๋“ค์˜ ๊ฒ€ํ† ์™ฟ’ ์ˆ˜์ •์„ ๊ฑฐ์นœ, ๊ตฐ๋”๋”๊ธฐ ์—†๋Š” ์ตœ์ข…ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž 5๋ถ„์˜ ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ์—„๊ธ‰ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ๋งŒ ๋ชจ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ์„ธ๋ จ๋œ ์–ดํœ˜๊ตฌ์‚ฌ์™ฟ’ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ฐธ๊ณ ํ•˜์‹œ์–ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋งŒ์˜ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ ๋„์›€๋˜์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ๋ชฉ์ฐจ

    ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž ๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ

    1. ์ผ๋ฐ˜์‚ฌ๋ฌด์ง/์‚ฌ๋ฌด๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ง
    2. Customer Service Admin ์ง๋ฌด
    3. IT ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ง€์› ์ง๋ฌด
    4. Sales Admin ์ง๋ฌด
    5. ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์ง๋ฌด

    ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ

    1. ๊ฒฝ์˜์ง€์›/์ผ๋ฐ˜์‚ฌ๋ฌด ์ง๋ฌด

    Susan Kim
    123, Bangbae-dong, Seocho-gu, Seoul, Republic of Korea
    Tel. 02-123-1234 / Mobile. 010-123-1234
    <a href=mailto:susan_kim@email.com>susan_kim@email.com</a>
    Date: DD/MM/YYYY

    Business administration position

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    As a graduate from XX University with Bachelorโ€™s degrees in Arts in English, I am so excited to express my huge interest in applying for the Business Administration position which has been advertised on your website. I believe that I am the right person for this occupation based on my personality and work experience, and I am sure I could perform various tasks which are required successfully.

    - ์ค‘๋žต -

    I am sufficient in analyzing data of various fields from my work experience, especially market trends and numeral value which can be extremely useful when managing information. Also, I am well practiced in using Microsoft Office programs such as Word, Excel plus PowerPoint and am moreover fluent in English being able to give presentations and a rendering of documentation.

    -์ค‘๋žต-

    I would genuinely appreciate a response to discuss with and show you further the range of my capabilities and great zest for this career. Thank you very much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours faithfully,
    Susan Kim
  • ์ž๋ฃŒํ›„๊ธฐ

      Ai ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ
      ๋งค๋ฒˆ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ธ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ด ์ฃผ์–ด ์ง€์‹์˜ ํญ์ด ๋„“์–ด์ง€๋Š” ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์งฟ’์‹ํŒ๋งค์ž ๋•๋ถ„์— ๋งŽ์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ •๋ง ์ถ”์ฒœํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
    • ์ž์ฃผ๋ฌป๋Š”์งˆ๋ๅฉ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

      ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค FAQ ๋”๋ต–๊ธฐ

      ๊ผญ ์•Œ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

      • ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ์ง„์‹ค์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๋ณด์ฆํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉฐ, ํ•ด๋‹น ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ๊ณผ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ๋ฒ•์  ์ฑ…์ž„์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋“ฑ๋ก์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋ฒ•์  ์ด์šฉ, ๋ฌด๋‹จ ์ „์žฌโˆ™๋ฐฐํฌ๋Š” ๊ธˆ์ง€๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด, ๋ช…์˜ˆํ›ผ์† ๋“ฑ ๋ถ„์Ÿ ์š”์†Œ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ ์‹œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva์˜ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด ์‹ ๊ณ ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva๋ฅผ ์ด์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      • ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋งค์ž์™ฟ’ ํŒ๋งค์ž ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ์กฑํ•˜๋Š” ์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์•„๋ž˜์˜ 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ž๋ฃŒํ™˜๋ถˆ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๊ผญ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘๋ณต์ž๋ฃŒ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ ์—†์Œ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŒŒ์ผํ˜•์‹์— ๋งž๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์ •์ƒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™ฟ’ 70% ์ด์ƒ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ (์ค‘๋ณต์ž„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•จ) ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ธฐ๊ด€, ํ•™๊ป“, ์„œ์  ๋“ฑ์˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋„์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ

    ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ตฌ๋งคํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

    ๋ฌธ์„œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI
    ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค์˜ ๋ฐฉ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์„ ๋ณ„ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ๋งŒ์˜ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ์ €๋Š” ์•„๋ž˜์™ฟ’ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋„์™ฟ’๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์ฃผ์ œ๋งŒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ชฉ์ฐจ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ž๋™ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์žฅ๋ฌธ์˜ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋ฅผ ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์Šคํ† ์–ด์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์บ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์ •๋ณ„๋กœ 1ํšŒ ๋ฐœ๊ธ‰ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ฒดํ—˜ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!
    ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ฃผ์ œ๋“ค์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
    - ์œ ์•„์—๊ฒŒ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ๋ฌธํ•™์ž‘ํ’ˆ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€๊ณผ ํŠน์„ฑ
    - ํ•œ๊ตญ์ธ์˜ ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์ •์‹ ์  ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€์„ ์ด๋ฃจ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ , ํ˜„๋Œ€ํ•œ๊ตญ์‚ฌํšŒ์—์„œ ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๊ฑด๊ณผ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋ฅผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
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