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[์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ํ•œ๊ธ€๋ฒˆ์—ญํฌํ•จ] ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ ๋ชจ์Œ (์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ, ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ, cover letter, ์˜์–ด์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ, ์˜์–ด์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ)

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[์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ํ•œ๊ธ€๋ฒˆ์—ญํฌํ•จ] ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ ๋ชจ์Œ (์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ, ์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ, cover letter, ์˜์–ด์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ, ์˜์–ด์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ƒ˜ํ”Œ)
  • ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ

    ์†Œ๊ฐœ

    ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ์„ธ๋ จ๋œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์—„์„ ๋œ ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž ๋ฒ ์ŠคํŠธ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ(์ปค๋ฒ„๋ ˆํ„ฐ) ๋ชจ์Œ๊ณผ ํ•œ๊ธ€ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๋ณธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ๋‚˜๋งŒ์˜ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž์†Œ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ์— ๋„์›€ ๋˜์‹œ๋„๋ก ํ•œ๊ธ€๋ฒˆ์—ญ๊นŒ์ง€ ํฌํ•จ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•, ์š”๋ น๋“ฑ์€ ์ƒ๋žตํ•˜์˜€๊ณ ,
    ํ—ค๋“œํ—Œํ„ฐ๋“ค์˜ ๊ฒ€ํ† ์™ฟ’ ์ˆ˜์ •์„ ๊ฑฐ์นœ, ๊ตฐ๋”๋”๊ธฐ ์—†๋Š” ์ตœ์ข…ํ•ฉ๊ฒฉ์ž 5๋ถ„์˜ ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ์—„๊ธ‰ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ๋งŒ ๋ชจ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ์„ธ๋ จ๋œ ์–ดํœ˜๊ตฌ์‚ฌ์™ฟ’ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ฐธ๊ณ ํ•˜์‹œ์–ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋งŒ์˜ ์˜๋ๅฉ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ ๋„์›€๋˜์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ๋ชฉ์ฐจ

    1. ๊ฒฝ์˜์ง€์›/์ผ๋ฐ˜์‚ฌ๋ฌด ์ง๋ฌด
    2. ๊ณ ๊ฐ์ง€์›์‚ฌ์—…๋ถ€ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ (Customer Service Admin) ์ง๋ฌด
    3. IT ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์ง€์› (Technical Support) ์ง๋ฌด
    4. ์˜์—…๊ด€๋ฆฌ (Sales Admin) ์ง๋ฌด
    5. ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…/๊ธฐํš ์ง๋ฌด

    ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    Please consider this application for Sales Administrator at XXX Division.

    Iโ€™m a senior at XX University, majoring in German Language and Literature and Iโ€™ will get a Bachelorโ€™s degree in February, 2013. Through studying Literature and other culture, I could broaden my thinking and look in different way at a same thing.
    Also I took Business and Marketing classes which I could learn and practice excellent marketing plans and business skills.
    -์ค‘๋žต-
    My business skills are balanced by my willingness to learn and my ability to quickly understand and apply new information. I am able to work independently and efficiently, to manage multiple tasks simultaneously, and am known as a team p_badtags and go-getter who persistently follows up until a problem is completely resolved. I am not the person who is waiting for a chance but who is highly motivated and I take challenge without hesitation.

    - ํ•œ๊ธ€๋ฒˆ์—ญ -
    ์˜์—…๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์ง๋ฌด

    ์ฑ„์šฉ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž ๋ถ„๊ป˜,

    ๋ณธ ์ง€์›์„œ๋ฅผ XXX ์‚ฌ์—…๋ถ€์˜ ์˜์—…๊ด€๋ฆฌ ์ง๋ฌด์— ๊ณ ๋ คํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์ €๋Š” XX ๋Œ€ํ•™๊ป“์˜ ์กธ์—…๋ฐ˜์œผ๋กœ ๋…์–ด๋…๋ฌธํ•™๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ „๊ณตํ•˜์—ฌ 2013๋…„ 2์›”์— ํ•™์‚ฌ ํ•™์œ„๋ฅผ ๊ฐ–๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธํ•™๊ณผ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋ฌธํ™”๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ์˜ ํญ์„ ๋„“ํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์‹œ๊ฐ์„ ๊ฐ–๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ๋˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์™ฟ’ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ๋“ค์œผ๋ฉฐ ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๊ธฐํš๊ณผ ๊ฒฝ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์ตํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์ค‘๋žต -
    ์ €์˜ ๋น„์Šค๋‹ˆ์Šค ์—ญ๋Ÿ‰์€ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ์˜์ง€์™ฟ’ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ณ  ์ ์šฉ์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ๊ท ํ˜•์„ ์ด๋ฃจ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฑด์˜ ์—…๋ฌด๋ฅผ ๋™์‹œ์— ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ํšจ์œจ์ ์ด๋ฉฐ ๋…์ž์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ผํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Šฅ์ˆ™ํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ๋  ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ˆ์งˆ๊ธฐ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ๊ณ  ๋Š˜์–ด์ง€๋Š” ๋ˆ์งˆ๊ธด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์œผ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํŒ€ ํ”Œ๋ ˆ์ด์–ด๋กœ ์ธ์ •๋ฐ›์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ๊ฐ€ ์˜ฌ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ๋‹ค๋ถ„ํžˆ ์˜์š•์ ์ด๊ณ  ๋ง์„ค์ž„ ์—†์ด ๋„์ „ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  • ์ž๋ฃŒํ›„๊ธฐ

      Ai ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ
      ์งฟ’์‹ํŒ๋งค์ž๊ฐ€ ๋“ฑ๋กํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊นŠ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ถ„์„์ด ๋‹๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋„ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ข‹์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ฑ๋ก๋˜๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    • ์ž์ฃผ๋ฌป๋Š”์งˆ๋ๅฉ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

      ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค FAQ ๋”๋ต–๊ธฐ

      ๊ผญ ์•Œ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

      • ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ์ง„์‹ค์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๋ณด์ฆํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉฐ, ํ•ด๋‹น ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ๊ณผ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ๋ฒ•์  ์ฑ…์ž„์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋“ฑ๋ก์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋ฒ•์  ์ด์šฉ, ๋ฌด๋‹จ ์ „์žฌโˆ™๋ฐฐํฌ๋Š” ๊ธˆ์ง€๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด, ๋ช…์˜ˆํ›ผ์† ๋“ฑ ๋ถ„์Ÿ ์š”์†Œ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ ์‹œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva์˜ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด ์‹ ๊ณ ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva๋ฅผ ์ด์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      • ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋งค์ž์™ฟ’ ํŒ๋งค์ž ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ์กฑํ•˜๋Š” ์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์•„๋ž˜์˜ 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ž๋ฃŒํ™˜๋ถˆ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๊ผญ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘๋ณต์ž๋ฃŒ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ ์—†์Œ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŒŒ์ผํ˜•์‹์— ๋งž๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์ •์ƒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™ฟ’ 70% ์ด์ƒ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ (์ค‘๋ณต์ž„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•จ) ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ธฐ๊ด€, ํ•™๊ป“, ์„œ์  ๋“ฑ์˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋„์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ

    ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ตฌ๋งคํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

    ๋ฌธ์„œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI
    ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค์˜ ๋ฐฉ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์„ ๋ณ„ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ๋งŒ์˜ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ์ €๋Š” ์•„๋ž˜์™ฟ’ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋„์™ฟ’๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์ฃผ์ œ๋งŒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ชฉ์ฐจ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ž๋™ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์žฅ๋ฌธ์˜ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋ฅผ ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์Šคํ† ์–ด์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์บ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์ •๋ณ„๋กœ 1ํšŒ ๋ฐœ๊ธ‰ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ฒดํ—˜ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!
    ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ฃผ์ œ๋“ค์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
    - ์œ ์•„์—๊ฒŒ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ๋ฌธํ•™์ž‘ํ’ˆ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€๊ณผ ํŠน์„ฑ
    - ํ•œ๊ตญ์ธ์˜ ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์ •์‹ ์  ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€์„ ์ด๋ฃจ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ , ํ˜„๋Œ€ํ•œ๊ตญ์‚ฌํšŒ์—์„œ ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๊ฑด๊ณผ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋ฅผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
    - ์ž‘๋ณ„์ธ์‚ฌ ๋…ํ›„๊ฐ
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