PARTNER
๊ฒ€์ฆ๋œ ํŒŒํŠธ๋„ˆ ์ œํœด์‚ฌ ์ž๋ฃŒ

๊ฐ„ํ˜ธํ•™ ๋Œฟ’ํ•™์›์ƒ์˜ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„์—์„œ์˜ ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋ถ„์„ (Analysis of Writing in Graduate Nursing Studentsโ€™ Reflective Journal)

23 ํŽ˜์ด์งฟ’
๊ธฐํƒ€ํŒŒ์ผ
์ตœ์ดˆ๋“ฑ๋ก์ผ 2025.05.22 ์ตœ์ข…์ ฟ’์ž‘์ผ 2015.11
23P ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ
๊ฐ„ํ˜ธํ•™ ๋Œฟ’ํ•™์›์ƒ์˜ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„์—์„œ์˜ ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋ถ„์„
  • ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ

    ์„œ์่ง์ •๋ต–

    ยท ๋ฐœํ–‰๊ธฐ๊ด€ : ํ•™์Šต์ž์ค‘์‹ฌ๊ต๊ณผ๊ต์œกํ•™ํšŒ
    ยท ์ˆ˜๋ก์ง€ ์ •๋ณด : ํ•™์Šต์ž์ค‘์‹ฌ๊ต๊ณผ๊ต์œก์—ฐ๊ตฌ / 15๊ถŒ / 11ํ˜ธ / 553 ~ 575ํŽ˜์ด์งฟ’
    ยท ์ €์ž๋ช… : ๊น€๋ฏธ์˜, ์ดํ–ฅ์—ฐ

    ์ดˆ๋ก

    ๋ณธ ์—ฐ๊ตฌ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์€ ๊ฐ„ํ˜ธํ•™ ๋Œฟ’ํ•™์› ์ˆ˜์—…์—์„œ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„์„ ์ด์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์˜ ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํŠน์„ฑ๊ณผ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๋ถ„์„ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ํ•™์Šต์— ๋ฏธ์น˜๋Š” ํšจ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ํƒ์ƒ‰ํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์žˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฐ๊ตฌ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋Š” ์ผ๊ฐœ ๋Œ€ํ•™๊ป“์˜ ๊ฐ„ํ˜ธํ•™ ๋Œฟ’ํ•™์› ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ•ํ•œ 14๋ช… ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ์ œ์ถœํ•œ 126๊ฐœ์˜ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„๊ณผ 5๋ช…์˜ ํ•™์ƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฉด๋‹ด์ด์—ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ถ„์„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ, ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋Œ€์ƒ์€ ๊ฐ„ํ˜ธ์™ฟ’ ํ•™์Šต๋‚ด์šฉ ๋“ฑ ์ž์‹ ๊ณผ ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋จผ ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„œ์ˆ ์ด ์ฃผ๋ฅผ ์ด๋ฃจ์—ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋ชฉ์ ์—์„œ๋„ ํšŒ๊ณ ๋‚˜ ๋ฐ˜์„ฑ์˜ ๋นˆ๋„๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋‚ฎ์•„ ๊ฐœ์ธ์  ์ž์•„์™ฟ’ ๊ฐ€๊นŒ์›Œ์งˆ์ˆ˜๋ก ์„œ์ˆ  ๋นˆ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋‚ฎ์€ ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด ํ–ฅํ›„ ๊ณ„ํš์ด๋‚˜ ํ•™์Šต์—ฐ๊ณ„์˜ ๋น„์œจ์€ ๋†’์•˜๋‹ค. ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํ˜•์‹์—์„œ๋Š” ์—ฐ์—ญ์  ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์œผ๋ฉฐ ์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์„œ๋ก , ๋ณธ๋ก , ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์˜ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๊ฐ–์ถ”๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•œํŽธ, ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ ์ œ์‹œ๊ฐ€ ์ฃผ๊ด€์  ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๋น„์œจ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚ฎ์•˜๊ณ  ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ์ „ํ˜€ ๊ฐ–์ถ”์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํ˜•์‹์„ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜์—์„œ๋„ ๋น„ํŒ์  ์‚ฌ๊ณ ์— ๋ฐ˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋…ผ์ฆ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ๋นˆ๋ฒˆํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ํ•™์ˆ ์  ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ ๊ต์œก์˜ ํ•„์š”์„ฑ์ด ์ œ๊ธฐ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค. ์งˆ์  ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋ถ„์„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ, ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์  ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๊ฒช์€ ๋ณ€ํ™”์—๋Š” โ€˜๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ์ˆ˜์›”์„ฑโ€™, โ€˜์ž์•„์ธ์‹์˜ ํ™•๋Œ€โ€™, โ€˜์ด๋ก ๊ณผ ์‹ค๋ฌด์˜ ์—ฐ๊ณ„โ€™ ๋“ฑ์˜ 3๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ฃผ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋„์ถœ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์€ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„์˜ ์ž‘์„ฑ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ž์•„์ธ์‹์„ ํ™•๋Œ€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ์„ฑ์ฐฐ์ €๋„์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ํ•™์ˆ ์  ๊ธฟ’์“ฐ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•จ์–‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Œ์ด ์‹œ์‚ฌ๋˜์—ˆ๋‹ค.

    ์˜์–ด์ดˆ๋ก

    The purpose of this study was to analyze the characteristics of writing in graduate nursing studentsโ€™ reflective journals and to examine the studentsโ€™ experiences of journal writing in order to explore its effect on their learning. The data analyzed consisted of 216 reflective journals from 14 graduate nursing students and interviews with five of them. The results showed that the most frequent writing subjects described were โ€˜nursingโ€™ and โ€˜learning contentsโ€™, which are both impersonal. โ€˜Reflectionโ€™ in the purpose of writing was illustrated the least, indicating that the rate of writing was lower if the subjects were more personal. In comparison, the โ€˜planningโ€™ or the โ€˜application of their learningโ€™ was more noticeable in the writing. The introduction, body, and conclusion of the journals were well all structured often with deductive writing. The rate of subjective writing was higher than that of logical evidence based opinion. and some journals were not well structured or their format was hard to distinguish. Many students frequently committed logical fallacies against critical thinking which implicates that the education of academic writing is necessary for graduate students. The changes experienced by many through their reflective writing were categorized into 'excellence in writing', 'the expansion of self-awareness', and 'liaison between theory and practice'. In conclusion, findings showed that reflective journal writing helps students to recognize the extent to which self-awareness can be expanded by hands-on practice and enables students to improve their academic writing.

    ์ฐธ๊ณ ์ž๋ฃŒ

    ยท ์—†์Œ
  • ์ž์ฃผ๋ฌป๋Š”์งˆ๋ๅฉ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

    ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค FAQ ๋”๋ณด๊ธฐ

    ๊ผญ ์•Œ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

    • ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ์ง„์‹ค์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๋ณด์ฆํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉฐ, ํ•ด๋‹น ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ๊ณผ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ๋ฒ•์  ์ฑ…์ž„์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋“ฑ๋ก์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋ฒ•์  ์ด์šฉ, ๋ฌด๋‹จ ์ „์žฌโˆ™๋ฐฐํฌ๋Š” ๊ธˆ์ง€๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด, ๋ช…์˜ˆํ›ผ์† ๋“ฑ ๋ถ„์Ÿ ์š”์†Œ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ ์‹œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva์˜ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด ์‹ ๊ณ ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva๋ฅผ ์ด์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    • ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋งค์ž์™ฟ’ ํŒ๋งค์ž ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ์กฑํ•˜๋Š” ์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์•„๋ž˜์˜ 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ž๋ฃŒํ™˜๋ถˆ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๊ผญ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘๋ณต์ž๋ฃŒ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ ์—†์Œ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜
      ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŒŒ์ผํ˜•์‹์— ๋งž๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์ •์ƒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™ฟ’ 70% ์ด์ƒ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ (์ค‘๋ณต์ž„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•จ) ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ธฐ๊ด€, ํ•™๊ป“, ์„œ์  ๋“ฑ์˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋„์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ

โ€œํ•™์Šต์ž์ค‘์‹ฌ๊ต๊่ด๊ต์œก์—ฐ๊ตฌโ€์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋…ผ๋ๅฉ๋„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

๋ฌธ์„œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI
์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค์˜ ๋ฐฉ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์„ ๋ณ„ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ๋งŒ์˜ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์ €๋Š” ์•„๋ž˜์™ฟ’ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋„์™ฟ’๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- ์ฃผ์ œ๋งŒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ชฉ์ฐจ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ๋‚ด์šฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ž๋™ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- ์žฅ๋ฌธ์˜ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋ฅผ ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- ์Šคํ† ์–ด์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์บ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์ •๋ณ„๋กœ 1ํšŒ ๋ฐœ๊ธ‰ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ฒดํ—˜ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!
์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ฃผ์ œ๋“ค์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
- ์œ ์•„์—๊ฒŒ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ๋ฌธํ•™์ž‘ํ’ˆ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€๊ณผ ํŠน์„ฑ
- ํ•œ๊ตญ์ธ์˜ ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์ •์‹ ์  ๊ฐ€์น˜๊ด€์„ ์ด๋ฃจ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ , ํ˜„๋Œ€ํ•œ๊ตญ์‚ฌํšŒ์—์„œ ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๊ฑด๊ณผ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋ฅผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”
- ์ž‘๋ณ„์ธ์‚ฌ ๋…ํ›„๊ฐ
ํ•ด์บ  AI ์ฑ—๋ด‡๊ณผ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๊ธฐ
์ฑ—๋ด‡์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ„ํŽธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๋‹ดํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
2025๋…„ 06์›” 08์ผ ์ผ์š”์ผ
AI ์ฑ—๋ด‡
์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค AI ์ฑ—๋ด‡์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌด์—‡์ด ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•˜์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?
9:28 ์˜ค์ „