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[์˜๋ๅฉํ•™ / ์†Œ์„ค ] the birthmark essay / ์˜์–ด ์—์„ธ์ด

์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”^^ The birthmark ์†Œ์„ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์—์„ธ์ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ž‘๋…„ 12์›”๋‹ฌ์— ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์˜€๊ตฌ์š”. the birthmark์˜ ์ฃผ์ธ๊ณต ๋ถ„์„, ์˜๋ฏธ๋ถ„์„ ๋“ฑ์„ ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์„œ์ˆ ํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ€ํ•™๊ป“์—์„œ ์˜๋ๅฉํ•™์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ๊ณผ์ œ๋กœ ์ œ์ถœํ•˜์˜€๋Š”๋ฐ 10์ ๋งŒ์ ์— 10์ ๋ฐ›์€ ์—์„ธ์ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ฐธ์กฐํ•ด์„œ ์—์„ธ์ด์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ ๋„์›€๋˜์‹œ๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ฉฐ ์˜ฌ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค^^ ํ˜น์‹œ ์ดํ•ด์•ˆ๊ฐ€์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์žˆ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋‚˜ ์ œ ํŽ˜์ด์งฟ’์— ๋“ค์–ด์˜ค์…”์„œ ์งˆ๋ฌธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ๋‹ต๋ณ€ํ•ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค^^ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ต์ˆ˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋˜ ํ‰๊ฐ€์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. I am surprised at how much you were able to cram into two pages. You look closely at the passage, give an interpretation, and also speculate on the issue of science. ๊ต์ˆ˜๋‹˜๊ป˜์„œ ์ง์ ‘ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์ง€์ ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹ ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋‹ค ๊ณ ์ณค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์•„๋งˆ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ค‘ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ์—†์„ ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
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[์˜๋ๅฉํ•™ / ์†Œ์„ค ] the birthmark essay / ์˜์–ด ์—์„ธ์ด
  • ๋ฏธ๋้ฉ๋ณด๊ธฐ

    ์†Œ๊ฐœ

    ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”^^
    The birthmark ์†Œ์„ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์—์„ธ์ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ์ž‘๋…„ 12์›”๋‹ฌ์— ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์˜€๊ตฌ์š”.
    the birthmark์˜ ์ฃผ์ธ๊ณต ๋ถ„์„, ์˜๋ฏธ๋ถ„์„ ๋“ฑ์„ ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์„œ์ˆ ํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ๋Œ€ํ•™๊ป“์—์„œ ์˜๋ๅฉํ•™์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ๊ณผ์ œ๋กœ ์ œ์ถœํ•˜์˜€๋Š”๋ฐ 10์ ๋งŒ์ ์— 10์ ๋ฐ›์€ ์—์„ธ์ด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ์ฐธ์กฐํ•ด์„œ ์—์„ธ์ด์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ ๋„์›€๋˜์‹œ๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ฉฐ ์˜ฌ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค^^
    ํ˜น์‹œ ์ดํ•ด์•ˆ๊ฐ€์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์žˆ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋‚˜ ์ œ ํŽ˜์ด์งฟ’์— ๋“ค์–ด์˜ค์…”์„œ ์งˆ๋ฌธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด
    ๋‹ต๋ณ€ํ•ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋„๋ก ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค^^

    ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ต์ˆ˜๋‹˜๊ป˜ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋˜ ํ‰๊ฐ€์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    I am surprised at how much you were able to cram into two pages. You look closely at the passage, give an interpretation, and also speculate on the issue of science.
    ๊ต์ˆ˜๋‹˜๊ป˜์„œ ์ง์ ‘ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์ง€์ ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹ ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋‹ค ๊ณ ์ณค๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์•„๋งˆ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ค‘ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ์—†์„ ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

    ๋ชฉ์ฐจ

    ์—†์Œ

    ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ

    What do you think of a โ€˜birthmarkโ€™? Do you like it or hate it? Here is a story about a man who detests a birthmark. It is written in Nathaniel Hawthorneโ€™s โ€œThe Birth-Mark.โ€ I think Hawthorne criticizes our modern society that our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power through the story of the birthmark. I will introduce it by dealing with the passage that Georgiana accepts removal of a mark after Aylmerโ€™s dream (paragraph 11 ~ 22).

    ์ฐธ๊ณ ์ž๋ฃŒ

    ยท ์—†์Œ
  • ์ž๋ฃŒํ›„๊ธฐ

      Ai ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ
      ์งฟ’์‹ํŒ๋งค์ž๊ฐ€ ๋“ฑ๋กํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ํ’๋ถ€ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊นŠ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ถ„์„์ด ๋‹๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณผ์ œ์— ๋ฐ”๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ๋งŽ์•„ ๋งค์šฐ ๋งŒ์กฑํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ์‚ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    • ์ž์ฃผ๋ฌป๋Š”์งˆ๋ๅฉ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

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      ๊ผญ ์•Œ์•„์ฃผ์„ธ์š”

      • ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ์ง„์‹ค์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๋ณด์ฆํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉฐ, ํ•ด๋‹น ์ •๋ณด ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ๊ณผ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ๋ฒ•์  ์ฑ…์ž„์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋“ฑ๋ก์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ž๋ฃŒ ๋ฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๋‚ด์šฉ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋ฒ•์  ์ด์šฉ, ๋ฌด๋‹จ ์ „์žฌโˆ™๋ฐฐํฌ๋Š” ๊ธˆ์ง€๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด, ๋ช…์˜ˆํ›ผ์† ๋“ฑ ๋ถ„์Ÿ ์š”์†Œ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ ์‹œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva์˜ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ์นจํ•ด ์‹ ๊ณ ๋น„๋ฐ”์นด์ง€๋…ธ Viva๋ฅผ ์ด์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
      • ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋งค์ž์™ฟ’ ํŒ๋งค์ž ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ์กฑํ•˜๋Š” ์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ์•„๋ž˜์˜ 4๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ž๋ฃŒํ™˜๋ถˆ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๊ผญ ํ™•์ธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘๋ณต์ž๋ฃŒ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ ์—†์Œ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŒŒ์ผํ˜•์‹์— ๋งž๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์ •์ƒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™ฟ’ 70% ์ด์ƒ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ (์ค‘๋ณต์ž„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•จ) ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ธฐ๊ด€, ํ•™๊ป“, ์„œ์  ๋“ฑ์˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋„์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ

    ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ตฌ๋งคํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋„ ํ™•์ธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

    ๋ฌธ์„œ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI
    ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํ•ดํ”ผ์บ ํผ์Šค์˜ ๋ฐฉ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ ์ค‘์—์„œ ์„ ๋ณ„ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ๋งŒ์˜ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” EasyAI ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    ์ €๋Š” ์•„๋ž˜์™ฟ’ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋„์™ฟ’๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์ฃผ์ œ๋งŒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ชฉ์ฐจ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ž๋™ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์žฅ๋ฌธ์˜ ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋ฅผ ์‰ฝ๊ณ  ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    - ์Šคํ† ์–ด์—์„œ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์บ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๊ณ„์ •๋ณ„๋กœ 1ํšŒ ๋ฐœ๊ธ‰ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ฒดํ—˜ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!
    ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ฃผ์ œ๋“ค์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
    - ์œ ์•„์—๊ฒŒ ์ ํ•ฉํ•œ ๋ฌธํ•™์ž‘ํ’ˆ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€๊ณผ ํŠน์„ฑ
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