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๋Œฟ’ํ•™์˜์–ด essay ์ž๋ฃŒ <Should universities require students to take physical education classes?>

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๋Œฟ’ํ•™์˜์–ด essay ์ž๋ฃŒ &lt;Should universities require students to take physical education classes?&gt;
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    Today many universities students suffer from a lack of exercise. Because of various things to do at home rather than go out and play, universities students have become less athletic. For these reasons, some people claim that universities should require students to take physical education class. But other people say that it is unnecessary.

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