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Lookism in Korea (์™ธ๋ชจ์งฟ’์ƒ์ฃผ์˜)

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Lookism in Korea (์™ธ๋ชจ์งฟ’์ƒ์ฃผ์˜)
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    intermediate level ์—์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ essay์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    3๊ฐœ์˜ cause ์™ฟ’ 3๊ฐœ์˜ effect ๋กœ ์ด๋ฃจ์–ด์ ธ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
    footnote ์™ฟ’ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์žฅ์— Bibliography ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

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    ๋ณธ๋ๅฉ๋‚ด์šฉ

    For a long time, the pursuit of beauty has been a human desire. In the middle ages, noblewomen drank batsโ€™ blood for their skin. They, furthermore, removed their ribs to have a skinny waist. How far should people go to get their beauty? William Safire who was a New York Times columnist mentioned the phenomenon โ€˜lookismโ€™ through his column on August 27, 2000. According to his column, lookism is defined as the tendency that people have when they cling excessively to appearances because they believe that appearances control an individualโ€™s success and failure, as well as superiority and inferiority. In other words, lookism can be defined as a belief that appearance is the most important thing in life. For 60 years after the Korean War, Koreans have achieved great economic development. At that time, Koreans usually did not have enough time to adorn themselves, but after the Korean economy developed, they could have time to dress up.

    ์ฐธ๊ณ ์ž๋ฃŒ

    ยท โŠ™ Bibliography
    ยท Book
    ยท Nan Do, Kim. Seoul University Professor, the Extravagant Country, Luxury Korea: A Source Book. Korea: psychology of consumption, 2007.
    ยท Magazine Article
    ยท Safire, William. โ€œThe Way We Live Now: 8-27-00: On Language; Lookism.โ€ New York Times Magazine, August 27, 2000.
    ยท Newspaper Article
    ยท Won Sang, Nam. โ€œSeoul is International Makeover Town.โ€ Dong A Times, October 1, 2007.
    ยท Sung Hee, Jung. โ€œA Plastic Surgery Tax Cutโ€, Dong A Times, August 22, 2006.
    ยท Internet Source
    ยท Scanlon, Charles. โ€œThe Price of Beauty in South Korea.โ€ BBC News, February 3, 2005,
    ยท news.bbc.co.uk.
    ยท Ki Hyoung, Lee. โ€œKorean youth Dieting, injurious healthy.โ€ MoneyToday, October 1, 2006,
    ยท www.moneytoday.co.kr.
    ยท Min Wook, Bae. โ€œDruken Korea by Luxury Goods.โ€ Newsis, December 22, 2007, news.naver.com,
    ยท logNo=60004893987.
    ยท Encyclopedia Article
    ยท โ€œPhysical attractivenessโ€ Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. January 05, 2008,
    ยท http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Physical_attractiveness.
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        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ค๋ฅ˜ ์ค‘๋ณต์ž๋ฃŒ ์ €์ž‘๊ถŒ ์—†์Œ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ๋ถˆ์ผ์น˜
        ํŒŒ์ผ์˜ ๋‹ค์šด๋กœ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ํŒŒ์ผํ˜•์‹์— ๋งž๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์ •์ƒ ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™ฟ’ 70% ์ด์ƒ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ (์ค‘๋ณต์ž„์„ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•จ) ์ธํ„ฐ๋„ท์˜ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ธฐ๊ด€, ํ•™๊ป“, ์„œ์  ๋“ฑ์˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋„์šฉํ•œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ์„ค๋ช…๊ณผ ์‹ค์ œ ์ž๋ฃŒ์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ผ์น˜ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ

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    ์ฐพ์œผ์‹œ๋˜ ์ž๋ฃŒ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ๊ฐ€์š”?

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